IELTS Task 1 #1

My answer

The bar graph illustrates the challenges that people achieve when they are in other country, separated by age,  in people with age between 18 to 34, 35 to 35 and over 55 ages. The bar graph shows three aspects that people faces, like learning another language, finding somewhere to live and making friends.

People over 55 years have how the most challenge reported the learning a new language, counting in 55 percent against the 22 percent in finding somewhere to live and 23 percent to make friends.  People who age is between 35 to 54 years don't have high variances in these three challenges. 46 percent of the people with age between 18 and 34 have "make friends" how the high challenge, following by 40 percent to finding somewhere to live and 29 percent to learning the local language.

Finally, the bar graph shows the differences between the challenges in three distinct groups of age and can be observed that the three challenges are distributed in different amounts.

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Model Ansewar

The chart shows the challenges people face when they settle in a new country and how the challenges vary according to people’s ages. The most challenging aspect for young people aged 18 to 34 is making new friends, a problem experienced by 46% of the people in this age group. 

However, only 36% of 35 - 54 year olds find it hard to make friends, while even fewer people over 55 (23%) have this problem. 54% of the older age group finds learning the local language the biggest obstacle when settling. In comparison, the youngest age group finds this easier, and the percentage of people who have problems learning the language is much lower, at only 29%. 

In contrast to their language-learning difficulties, only 22% of people in the oldest age group have trouble finding accommodation. However, this is the second most significant problem for the other two age groups with 39% to 40% of the people in each group finding it hard. 

In general, all age groups experience the same problems to some extent, but people over the age of 55 reported that they face markedly fewer challenges settling in a new country than their younger respondents.

Transitional and Linking Words used in multiple paragraph essays

Hi folks! Today I'm bringing transitional and linking words, they can be used in our essays! Are extremely important when we are writing a text, this help us to improve our abilities in have a writing better. I hope this can help some people! See you!

ADD INFORMATION
again - novamente
besides - além de
moreover - além disso
another - outro
together with - juntamente com
and - e
likewise - também
as well - também
*furthermore - além disso
*additionally - adicionalmente
along with - juntamente com
also - também
for example - por examplo
equally - igualmente
important - importante
further - mais / além / mais longe

CONCLUDE OR SUMARIZE
in short - em resumo
finally - finalmente
*in summary - em síntese
*in conclusion - em conclusão
consequently - consequentemente
due to - devido a
all in all - tudo em todos
as a result - como resultado
accordingly - conformemente
to sum up - para resumir
thus - assim
therefore - portanto

CONTRAST TWO THINGS OS SHOW A DIFFERENCE
but - mas
*otherwise - caso contrário
*even though - apesar de
conversely - reciprocamente
even so - ainda ssim
*yet - ainda
*however - contudo
counter to - contador para
on the other hand - por outro lado
as opposed to - ao contrário de
in the meantime - ao mesmo tempo
in spite of - apesar de
*on the contrary - pelo contrário
nevertheless - não obstante
still - ainda

EMPHASIZE A POINT
again - novamente
*indeed - de fato
to repeat - para repetir
truly - verdadeiramente
*in fact - de fato
*to emphasize - para enfatizar
*for this reason - por esta razão
*with this in mind - com isto em mente



*most used in american englishg / mais utilizadas no inglês americano

Technology today

The Technology is growing each time more. It can help people in some aspects in their lives and making actions more quickly. For example, the connection that we have with distant families and friends via video conference due to internet.

Internet is a kind of tool that each time more is achieve more and more houses. As a result, more people have been inserted in this globalized world.

Indeed internet help us to be connected all day, for this reason we need control our activities to don't prejudice us. In the meantime that exists people who don't know how use the technologies well, we can find people who use to aggregate functionalities  in their lives, yet. Functionalities that can facilitate actions in their day-to-day.